Contents 1 Darth Bane 1.1 Things to do 1.2 Removal of FA status 1.3 Comments

Darth BaneEdit

• Status: Former featured Article (other options are "featured article", "former featured article", and "article")

Things to doEdit

• Sourcing.
• Expand "New Sith Wars" section.
• Check for continuity conflicts.
• Personality and Traits section.
• Longer intro needed
• Flowery prose
• Some POV (spectacular uses of the Force, etc.) (do amazing things with the Force, etc.)
• Explanation of the Bouncer killing needed
• 1st paragraph of Personality and traits should really be under Powers and Abilities. Actually, a lot of P&T is really Powers and Abilities. It tells nothing about his character.
• "He took the tile Darth"- should be title.
• Why is the saber form listed under BTS? It's not non-canon and it's not OOU.
• Vaapad mention in BTS is unnecessary as the article never mentions Vaapad. Either add in the bit about the user of Juyo/Vaapad by whoever Bane's opponent was or remove the note.

Removal of FA statusEdit

• FA status removed per IRC meeting.

CommentsEdit

• I fixed the second and fourth complaints, and I'm working on the first and fifth. Chack Jadson 23:28, 30 June 2007 (UTC)