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Halagad Ventor
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Things to do
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- Intro could use expansion.
- Done. --Azizlight 06:36, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
- Also, it's missing info from Classic Adventures: Volume Two, which contains a greatly expanded character profile for Halagad not present in the original Domain of Evil. There's quite a bit of good P&T info in it, and it gives a list of some Force powers he knows, more than enough to warrant a P&A, which this article is currently lacking. The article also seems to suffer a bit from 2007 syndrome. There's some awkward phrasing here and there, including an "it is probable" in the P&T, there's some linking issues (I may have taken care of that), and overall it just seems very...messy. It definitely needs a really good copyedit, maybe two, to bring it to current FA standards. Xicer9
(Combadge) 01:01, October 11, 2010 (UTC)
Removal of FA status
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- Put on probation per Meeting 36. Cylka-talk- 01:59, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
- FA status removed per Meeting 37.