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Jadru

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Support

1. Cull Tremayne 01:03, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
2. .... 01:13, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
3. Lord Hydronium 23:50, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
4. --Eyrezer 04:52, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
5. Imp 00:39, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Things to do

• There seemed to be too much detail in the intro, ie the shape of her throne doesn't need to be there, especially as it is basically repeated in the first main section.
  • Will do. Cull Tremayne 11:30, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done. Cull Tremayne 02:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
• The personality section seemed too coaxed to me. What is a "structured personality"? --Eyrezer 23:41, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Structured, as in she had her actions very carefully planned out. Organized probably would have been the better word. I'll change the wording. Cull Tremayne 11:30, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Any more comments on this? Tried to remove confusing wording, but I didn't feel like I was just stretching. Cull Tremayne 02:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

"It's a cat in a dress."

―Ric Olié

• I moved the discussion on possible species to the BTS. This is the more appropriate place for a discussion of this kind. --Eyrezer 23:41, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Good, wasn't sure where it would belong, as it's canon info. Cull Tremayne 11:30, 17 April 2007 (UTC)