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Keyan Farlander[]
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- Cull Tremayne 12:42, 9 March 2007 (UTC) -- What hasn't been said?
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Expand intro. Cull Tremayne 23:13, 7 March 2007 (UTC)Poor sectioning. Also, if that main pic is the best we can do, it needs to be downsized until it looks halfway decent. Someone with the books on hand should also check TFP and TUF, because I distinctly recall him serving as co-commander of the Second, not merely Antilles's subordinate. Other than that, good. Havac 22:24, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
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- YES! We need more X-wing articles that don't suck! -- Darth Culator (Talk)(Kills) 16:12, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
- I've checked and Havac's right about Keyan and Wedge joint commanding the second, so I've changed the article to reflect that. That's what happens when I just skim through without reading properly. Send any suggestions on improving the sectioning my way and I'll try to improve it. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:36, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
- Sectioning overall isn't so bad, but New Republic is just too small. It either needs to be expanded, or subsumed into one of the other sections. I'd suggest putting the first paragraph, about his GCW service, into the preceding section, and then using the New Republic header to hold the Jedi information, with the Yuuzhan Vong War as a subsection of that, or possibly eliminating that header altogether. I'd do it myself but I'm concerned about the sourcing. Havac 21:51, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
- Any better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:01, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
- I'm satisfied. Havac 23:00, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
- Any better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:01, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
- Sectioning overall isn't so bad, but New Republic is just too small. It either needs to be expanded, or subsumed into one of the other sections. I'd suggest putting the first paragraph, about his GCW service, into the preceding section, and then using the New Republic header to hold the Jedi information, with the Yuuzhan Vong War as a subsection of that, or possibly eliminating that header altogether. I'd do it myself but I'm concerned about the sourcing. Havac 21:51, 10 March 2007 (UTC)