Contents 1 Kyle Katarn 1.1 Things to do 1.2 Removal of FA status 1.3 Comments 1.4 Working on it

Kyle KatarnEdit

• Status: Former featured Article (other options are "featured article", "former featured article", and "article")

Things to doEdit

• Intro, images, source the article, source the quotes in the article, poor sectioning, poor placement of quotes, remove info on merchandise, condense BTS. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:52, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
• Poor image placement, not enough sectioning, quotes all over the place, talents & BTS are a mess, and needs expansion and inclusion of more recent canon (in a better-integrated form). Havac 23:03, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
  • I made the intro longer and added sectioning. What do you think now? Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 19:45, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
• Characteristics section far too long, mixed up with a lot of stuff that should go in the biography. - Lord Hydronium 03:03, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
• Citations needed.
• Intro needs expansion.
• Sectioning problems throughout.
• Game info could be integrated much better.
• Poor image placement.
• Talents & BTS are a mess.
• Merchandise info needs culling.

Removal of FA statusEdit

• FA status removed per IRC meeting.

Keep

Xepeyon 15:29, 5 March 2007 (UTC)

Remove

1. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:52, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
2. Havac 23:03, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

CommentsEdit

• This article is a terrible example of a FA and should be removed from FA status until fixed. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:52, 3 March 2007 (UTC)
• No reason to remove it. Just make your changes and get on with it. KEJ 14:23, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
  • It still has a probationary period until removed. We have to review these again two weeks later so there is a chance for improvement. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 16:16, 4 March 2007 (UTC)

Working on itEdit

I'm trying to fix this article up in hopes it can be restored to FA status. I am new here, so I still need a bit of direction for how articles are supposed to look. I am willing to put in the work if someone could help give me a bit of direction.

I just finished working on the New Republic section. Previously fixed up the Personailty section (might still need some work). Added the Equipment section and reworked the Powers section. It has been some time since anyone commented on what needs to be done to this article, so I am not sure how much of the above list needs to be fixed. Still need image, BTS, and merch culling? More intro info needed? --Queenofthe1ring 13:34, 16 March 2009 (UTC)