Things to doEdit
- Some POV issues.
- Prose and tense issues.—Tommy 9281 04:31, November 10, 2010 (UTC)
- More detail needed throughout.
Removal of FA statusEdit
- Put on probation per Meeting 36. Cylka-talk- 02:40, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
- Probation extended per Meeting 37.
- FA status removed per Meeting 38.
- I believe I've cleared up the issues in question. If further work is required, let me know. jSarek 12:21, November 10, 2010 (UTC)